In My Dream (Part 02)

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I had another dream.
This one was different.
Familiar.
There was a letter,
one I was afraid to open
like nothing else.
It was as if the house was trying to read over my shoulder;
brownish smudge of stone and wood.
But the grass was too short for that.
So I ran out to the meadow
and opened the envelope too cheap for a proper seal.
Oh how I didn't want to believe it.
How I didn't want to cry.
But I did believe it.
I did cry.

I don't think it was just a dream.
I think it was real.

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Remember the other poem/fragment I wrote like this? Well this plot bunny still won’t leave me alone. Quick update: I’m drowning in book ideas. Convince me that I should just do my homework and write this baby, already. xD

love,
abbiee

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  1. Homework, oh no. I do like this a lot though! Very well put together and the pictures work great with it

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    1. "Homework, oh no." < my thoughts exactly. XD This bunny is going to require a boatload of research but I think I'm read for it. Kinda. Thank you for reading, Vanessa!! :)

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  2. these are honestly two of my favorite of your posts, so I think writing it as a full fledged thing would be amazing! If you started off each chapter with a fragment like this- perfection.

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    1. FIHKGSKNXLS THANK YOU. That means so much to me gAAAH!! Also: that is a really cool idea, to start every chapter with a fragment like this. Like, why did I not think of this before??? GENIUS. THANK YOU.

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  3. I think your an amzing writer and should go for it!

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    1. Thank you so much, Nabila! :)

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  4. Abbiee, listen to meh.

    WRITE THE BOOOOOOOKKKKK I WANT TO REAAADDDDD ITTTTTTTTTTT.

    it will be like amazeballs. I BELIEVE IN YOU!

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    1. GAAAAAAAAAH THANK YOU AALIYAH. ♥ Literally this comment was very motivating to me. x) My hearrrrt. I will do it. I will. I will. ;)

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  5. I had a dream last night that I wrote a blog post about how to blow your nose.

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    1. Whoops, it wasn't last night. It was a couple nights ago.

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    2. THAT IS PERFECT. xD

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  6. DUDEEE HOMEWORK IS GOOD (did i just say that) BUT YOUR STORY NEEDS WRITTEN. STAT.

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    1. DUUUUUUUDE THANK YOUUU SO MUCH. ♥ true, homework is good. x) not tame, but good.

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  7. WRITE THIS!!! I WANT TO READ IT!!

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    1. EEEEEEE THANK YOU GRACE ANNE MY DEAR.

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    1. yay!! ♥ thank you, Megan!

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  9. gorgeous. truly stunning and i would love to read your story <3

    xx e

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    1. EEEEEEEP thank you so much Emily!! ♥ that means like, sooo much. :)

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  10. This is so MYSTERIOUS and full... so FULL. Okay so you know when you read something and you're like, all right. That's all there is to it. 2+2=4, the end. I read it and now i'm moving on with my life. And then you read something else... and you're like, I understand what this is saying on a literal level, but what else is there? How many other layers of meaning and understanding are here that I haven't even grasped yet? and you want to keep reading it over and over again and thinking and wondering and it just makes you curious...

    this reminds me of the second kind of writing. I can't figure it out right away, I don't know where you're going to take it, and I am CURIOUS RIGHT NOW ABBIEE

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    1. DVBKJSDNCUBSDDVBF I CANNOT EVEN BREATHE RN THAT IS LIKE THE BEST COMPLIMENT OF EVER THANK YOUUUUU. ♥ gah. And that is exactly what I wanted this fragment to feel like! Because I'm seeing my story in my head but nobody else is (yet) so it's ggaaaaaaaah yes. I can't even talk thank you so much for this. ♥

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  11. WHAT DUDE.
    um okay, i just love this so much. It really makes you feel, go into another world or realm kinda sorta...♥

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    1. GAAAAAAAH THANK YOU. like, so so much ♥

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  12. WRITE MORE cries <3<3
    your words are aadjsklajdkal i love you :::::::::) xx

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    1. VKDSCJDKFDKL THANK YOUUU i shall ♥ ily back x)

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kind words are like raindrops on the desert. they make me bloom with happiness, as absolutely cliche and cheesy as that sounds. even if it's just a simple alt+3 i will heart you for it. so, go ahead! MAKE MY DAY. literally.